Tuesday, 9 June 2015

SAND STORM!!! By Max

Yee haaaaaa!!!! Thought Max as he kicked a ball it went all the way to the sahara desert Max ran and ran suddenly a big sand storm whipped him off his feet he was terrified in the distance there was a dim light,was fading away "oh no"said Max
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  1. grantsbraes9 June 2015 at 22:54

    Love the bit about you being 'whipped off your feet' - great choice of words which paint a picture for your audience :)
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